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Vote in "Moxen?"
Poll ended at Mon Nov 27, 2017 10:55 am
Yea: 83%  83%  [ 5 ]
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Not As Is: 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Abstain: 17%  17%  [ 1 ]
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 Post subject: [Vote][Poem] Moxen
PostPosted: Sat Oct 28, 2017 10:55 am 
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Title: Moxen
Poet: RavenoftheBlack
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This is part of my informal "set" of three poems that I collectively consider my "Collector Series." This one, naturally, features the Moxen.

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PostPosted: Sat Nov 04, 2017 10:56 pm 
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The moxes are gems
Which sparkle all the brighter
In this poem. "Yea."

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 Post subject: Re: [Vote][Poem] Moxen
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I really like the way this one sets up a grander narrative, as the end we see the speaker overcome by the power of the moxen. This one caught my attention the most for something I'd like to see more of.

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 Post subject: Re: [Vote][Poem] Moxen
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I really like the way this one sets up a grander narrative, as the end we see the speaker overcome by the power of the moxen. This one caught my attention the most for something I'd like to see more of.

This one does feel it has the most raw potential and something of the cadence recalls a sense of the epics, though I can't pin down precisely what.

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 Post subject: Re: [Vote][Poem] Moxen
PostPosted: Sun Nov 26, 2017 8:39 pm 
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With all this talk of Mox epics, I wonder if this predates the five bearers of the divided set that Rhonwen faced in "The Ring". Or if it's another set, later.

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